
Originally Posted by
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I dont mean to be a troll or a jerk, but what's the hook? Why should I read your blog? Just want to make suggestionsi,.
Maybe include facts or guidance. Things you've learned and done wrong and how you could have corrected them, or learned from them. Without being harsh, I realize I'm new to this forum, but not new to writing for money, but why should I read yours over some else's? I'd be happy to read and hopefully learn some things as you seem to be on the right track but I think you need more to draw readers in and keep them reading. Thats the goal. Make it interesting and captivating! Maybe read through some good blogs on similar topics to get a good ideas as to what to write about. I'm sure with dedication and determination this will turn out great.